Motionless (Tanka....we hope...lol)
Biting crease of aWrinkle-free disparityBirths a static child.There is no recoil or shield.There is no shifting forward. SandDollar; June 23, 2002Will this work, groriter?--S$
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I like it, S$! ) Tanka is an interesting form. Gro got me onto it, as well..hehe. I'm a hussy when it comes to form..I'll try anything! I have the feeling you are the same and I think it is great way...
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Tanks, Bonnie! Glad it was structurally sound. A hussy for form??? LMAO. Yeah, I must admit that I'm a bit adventurous.--S$
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Sand:It really works. Keep writing those Tanks."At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." Plato
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This is a Tanka alright and a well written one as well. Well done and bravo on your firts attempt. IanModerating:pub37.ezboard.com/bthegoldenquill
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